This is our trailer in the beginning stages of filming. This includes only the asylum scenes and the storyboard scenes in between in place of the shots we are yet to film.
After presenting our trailer so far to the class this is the feedback we got back.
Our strengths are:
'The logos were good' I created these logos on photoshop to show the company logo called 'After dark'.
'The acting is good' Our friend Harriet offered to act in our trailer as the girl in the asylum and i feel she works well playing this role.
A lot of the feedback said 'The editing transitions are good', i feel this is our main strength because we worked together to be sure that the fast pace editing would work well.
Weaknesses:
People thought that the story line in our trailer 'narrative was unclear', this is understandable because the only shots that we filmed were the asylum scenes, which are flash backs during our filming we will edit the scenes to show the narrative more clearly.
Some people from the feedback also said that the mise-en-scene, the room that we filmed didn't look 'clinical enough' and needs to look more like an asylum, we are planning on re-filming parts of these scenes but to the same standard as the previously filmed scenes.
These images are of shot lists for my trailer. Looking at the shot numbers it looks mixed up, the main location will be shot inside the college, then there is 4 shots in a girls bedroom, then back in college. the college shots feature throughout and inbetween certain shots include distorted falsh backs or a mental asylum. The asylum shots will have various way of showing a mental state but not reveling the idnentiy of the girl. The finale of the trailer is in the park, which is where vairous things happen and there are 4 final shot panning around a band stand, shooting a close up on the faces of all four girls. 
